Before I start with the main chapter, just a thing about title… In every title of this series, the frist two words would be the name of the novel, then the number of chapter and then the name of the chapter… π Now sit back and bear with the first chapter ————————————————————————————————–
“Kritttiii….” A sharp voice disturbed Kriti, who was posting a new article on her blog.
“Ya… mom…??” She replied in the same noise peek voice.
“I don’t understand what love you have with your laptop?? It’s been two hours that you are surfing on net… what the hell are you doing?”
“Mom… I had posted an article on my blog and as soon as I published it.. likes and comments flooded in.. so I had to check them and reply to the comments..”
“Why can’t you reply to these comments later on… why are you always in a hurry to reply as soon as anybody would even comment “Nice job..” ”
“Because, when a person comments, he had taken time to type a comment for me… that’s so precious and I should reply them as soon as possible…”
“Whatever… by the way… what is your post about..??”
“Go and check on the web… and now when you have disturbed me… may I get the food…??”
“Ask your co- bloggers to feed you na…”
This is Kriti, an M.B.A. student from Delhi. She is the only child of her parents. She has an obsession for writing. She had always wanted to be a writer. But, she very well understands that in India, just being a writer is not gonna feed her. So, for now, she has this blog “stupidwinetalking” where she writes about any and every thing that crops up in her mind. She has a following of about 400 followers and many of them are her regular and dedicated readers.
About her family, her mother is very supportive about her writing passion. She herself had many dreams about her life but had to put off her ambitions away because of her sudden marriage with Kriti’s father. Kriti’s father, Mr. Suresh Roy, is a successful businessman. He has no interests to know his family’s interests and is conceived as a greedy businessman, who loves none but his inhuman company, by her own daughter. But, he doesn’t have time to know even this fact.
Hmm….So the First Chapter is good describing the characters in the Story.. π
ya… but the main character has not been revealed yet
I am glad that you liked it so far.. π
Ya the Main character I guess the Guy–Kriti will Love.. π
love shuv ka scene abhi socha nahi… let’s see with the progress in story ki kya hota hai..
Ok Then Let us See.. π
ok, you have my attention. i have no idea where you are headed with this book, but am interested in its unfolding. but this bit made me think of a conversation i had with someone about comments, etc. looking forward to it.
Thank you for your attention i hope my novel would be able to hold on to that π
yea, i’m looking forward to it. keep doing great work.
Good start… π
dhanyawaad π
Interesting characters! I came across this when I read your second chapter… I’m curious what the third chapter will be about.. π
Thanks for liking.. I hope i would be able to maintain the curiosity in every chapter π
I’m sure you’re going to do a great job! And anyway, in the end, we all write for ourselves. π
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